Pretty decent, read below
lol im only 14 and ive also been working with flash for a lil bit (like, a year), and its complicated. but here are some suggestions to make to this flash. first off, draw a circle, convert it to a symbol (right click, convert to symbol), then instead of movie clip, make it a button. then click on ur new button, and click F9. this will open up the actions screen. in it, type "on (Release) {gotoAndstop(2)}" without the quotes. but however, you must make absolutely sure that this button is in the first frame of your movie. then put a text box or something in the button, and write something like "PLAY!" or "-->". then test your movie. it should not start unless you click this newly made button. also, click the background of the stage (drawing area). click properties at the bottome of the screen. next, go over to where it should say "12 fps". u may need to minimize the coloring table to see this. change it to about 20, or whatever you find suitable. it will make the movie play faster, looking better and more realistic. hope this helps. but good movie anyhoo